A
round of applause broke along with the kiss. Too mortified to acknowledge it,
Ellie opened her eyes on Dane. “That wasn’t in the script,” she said, trying
not to sound as breathless as she felt.
He
smiled. “I was improvising.”
She
was about to inform him that one didn’t improvise in the movies when Hamilton
called for a lunch break. “Take it offset,” he suggested as he passed.
Dane’s
smiled widened. “Shall we?”
Ellie
didn’t know what to say or how to act. That she was attracted must have been
obvious, and it would have been fine had he chosen to test her in a less public
forum. She normally spaced her romances a few months apart—a sobering truth,
now that she thought of it. She had dumped Tony the night before starting this
film, less than a fortnight ago.
Was
she building a reputation?
Whatever
Dane saw in her eyes, it rattled his confidence. The smile vanished, replaced
by a boyish uncertainty beneath the overdone-for-the-camera makeup. He dropped
his lashes and stepped back to clear her path.
Ellie
braved a glance around the set. The cast and most of the crew had taken
Hamilton’s direction and departed for lunch. The remaining few were focused on
their equipment—lights and cameras—trying to ignore the awkward moment in their
midst.
Why
the hell had the director chosen to shoot this scene first?
“The
fact is,” Dane said, solemnly, “I’ve wanted to kiss you from the day we first
met.”
Ellie’s
heart thumped clumsily in her chest. She said nothing, and after a few beats,
Dane continued.
“I
thought—hoped—you might have felt the same way.”
She
was completely unprepared for him to lift her hand to his lips in a
Shakespearean plea for forgiveness, and she was so befuddled by the whole
incident that honesty seemed the only sure way out of it.
She
heard herself say, as if at a distance. “You were right.”
This story, ever single vignette, is just aces. Eleanor Bond is my favorite!
ReplyDeleteThank you yet again, Nic. I'm afraid this is morphing from a fun exercise to a real project, but I have some other stuff to finish first. And my exercise schedule has stalled of late, so the well isn't as full as it was a few weeks ago.
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