How did
Shakespeare do it? He wrote an entire play (maybe more than one) in iambic
pentameter – defined as a poem featuring five feet (or “iambs”) per line. An
iamb is two or three syllables with emphasis on the second or third syllable, i.e.,
“two households, both alike in dignity.”
A two-syllable word can be a single iamb, i.e. “alike”, because the emphasis is on syllable number two.
I know. If you’re
not a poetry geek – and I’m not – who cares? I am, however, a Shakespeare fan and
enough of a word geek to look at Will’s genius and see it as something within
my ability to emulate. I mean, five beats per line. How hard can it be?
Harder than it
looks, that’s for sure! I wasn’t aiming for a full-length play, either; just a
poem. A simple verse that doesn’t even rhyme! My natural rhythm is four iambs
per line. Creating space for that fifth beat just about did me in. In fact,
this grandiose notion occurred almost a year ago. It slipped off my radar when
it proved more difficult than I’d expected and less complex things distracted me
from the challenge. It resurfaced last week, when I decided to resume drafting
blog posts during my lunch break. I blew the dust off my office “blog log”,
took it to my not-normal café, ordered a chocolate chai with extra foam, opened
the journal’s cover, and a piece of paper – well-scribbled upon – fell onto the
table. Oh, ye gods, I thought, my nod to Shakespeare!
Upon revisiting
my effort, I decided it wasn’t that bad. It was, in fact, pretty good, and so
my chocolate chai sat cooling by my elbow as I spent the next half-hour
counting syllables and rearranging iambs into something loosely resembling a
Shakespearean-style verse.
And so, with
apologies to the Bard and no further ado, I humbly present my minuscule ode to
soul sistah Ter, who is always my better half.
Enjoy!
* * *
Two protons, mirrored in identity,
being sprung from a singular atom, when split
and parted
do remain connected as if by a force
unseen,
unknown yet known by far better than each
knows itself.
For home and home exist with these
particles.
’Cross stars and space, identical
response is prov’n.
Though dust and dark matter conspire to
confound, the bond
Ne’er breaks nor weakens. Twin parts of
one whole, space is
an illusion, and real for one is as much
for the other.
BRAVO!!! I am unable to do THAT! Oh, reading this aloud is just delicious.
ReplyDelete*bows* Thanks, Bean. With you being a poet, I reckon you'd have a good idea of how frickin' difficult this was, lol. Fun, too, though ... if not a bit presumptuous on my part. Humble pie, anyone?
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